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Post by Kichiro Haru on Sept 27, 2011 18:18:02 GMT -6
Hello Cross and welcome to Dango Daikazoku
I can't really finish reviewing this until you add in the User Information section of the application and the RP Sample, but I can just comment on this. Your personality and description are a mixture of personality, description, and history, and it's kind of confusing. For appearance, I just need a simple explanation of what she looks like; no need for anything. And personality, just explain how she acts. So try and get out the main points about her without mixing in too much of the other parts so its a lot clearer to us what you're trying to do.
History was fine though ^_^. And on a minor note, for face claim, please state who the character is and what series they are from. Unless you drew that yourself, in which case we'll need evidence for it.
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Post by crossmorento on Sept 30, 2011 14:04:51 GMT -6
xx Cross Morento xx Type xx Original. Age xx Seventeen. Year and Class xx 2- D Gender xx Female. Sexuality xx Hetreosexual. Crushes xx Narukami Akira.. Face Claim xx N/A
Description xx[/font] Morento weighs 90 lbs. and her height is 155 cm; she is very petite and she had decent curves added to her body. Despite her height, it shouldn't really matter if she was tall or short. But, being 155 cm. was kind of short. Morento might look and sound sweet, but she can beat someone up easily. She was very strong like Tomoyo and Kyou when she is in fights or something like that along with a medium build.
She has very long blonde hair that goes all the way down her back. Yes, she is a legally blonde. Morento has no split ends what-so-ever on her hair and it is shiny when she is in the sunlight. Her hair also has highlights which also adds the shine to her hair. She has soft purple eyes that makes you feel like you are casted under a spell when she looks at you. Most of the guys lose focus when they stare into her lavender eyes and in a little while, their following her around the school.
But, it only worked on guys that were desperate for a girlfriend. You might think Morento was weak, because her arms were slender and dainty, but don't let looks fool you. She can take you down in only a few seconds without getting a scratch on her. Morento makes it look so easy, considering that she took three or more years of karate classes when she was nine or so. Morento has a wardrobe of skirts, blue jeans, and shirts of various colors. The outfit she mostly wears is a long-sleeve T-shirt, black skirt, and tennis shoes. She always wore a star clip in her hair. But, when she is in school, she has to wear the school uniform. She makes sure to clean her uniform everyday and iron it. Morento was very serious about things being neat, but she wasn't a clean freak. Even though, she mostly cleans for other people. [/size] Personality xxMorento is a very smart, intelligent girl and she likes to make friends with mostly every student in the high school. She was actually happy and sad that she had to repeat her second year in high school. One, because she can make new friends and get to know people she doesn't really know. Two, her parents died and she failed to pass for her parents. She tries to take things into her own hands, but sometimes her plans don't really work.
Morento has a sassy attitude when someone picks a fight with her or with her friends and she goes into action. You can see that she is very protective and caring about her friends. She would not let anyone drive her down like that and get away with it. Morento has mixed emotions a lot, but you would mostly see her as a quiet, grieving, shy girl. She is very lonely since all of her friends passed on to the next grade and she promised her friend, Kaede, that she would not fail this year.
Morento had a lot of respect for Kotomi Ichinose and she had a small crush on Akira. But, she was too shy to talk to either one of them.... Kotomi was her inspiration. She tried her best to be like the one Akira likes, but she always ended up getting clumsy when she's around him. Morento loves animals and it doesn't matter what kind of animal it is, she loves animals and that's it. She is very focused on her studies this year, so she wouldn't have to repeat the same grade AGAIN.
Morento has her moments where she very outgoing and no longer shy, but you would mostly see her in her quiet mood. Yes, she is still grieving over her parents.... But, she tried not to let anyone know what was on her mind. Morento's main objective was to make tons of friends and get great grades like she use to. She likes to do work for older people that don't have the energy to do the chores themselves, and she liked to play with the little kids that lived nearby. [/size] History:[/font] Morento is the daughter of a music prodigy and a teacher. Her mother teaches at a school with little kids and her father is a music prodigy. They were very proud of Morento for getting wonderful grades in school and getting so many awards. Her mother taught her so much about every subject, and she wanted Morento to become a very smart girl. Her father was also urging to make Morento learn how to play every instrument made on earth, but she didn't like the banjo that much. Even though, she was really good at the banjo, she just didn't like to play it.
She was more of a violin, clarinet, flute, and piano kind of girl. They were all beautiful instruments and she spent more time playing those specific instruments then the other ones her father wanted her to play more often. It was Morento's choice, but would play the instruments her father wanted her to play just for a little while. But, out of the four instruments she liked to play, she admired the piano more than the others. Morento achieved so much, thanks to her parents. But, she failed to continue with studying and having the heart for music after that cold rainy night. Morento was sixteen years old back then and she was waiting for her parents to come home after they were done with work.
She was standing outside in the rain, waiting and waiting until she saw a familiar car drive towards her. It was her mother and father in the car and they waved at her. Morento waved back happily, she was always like this. She would always wait outside after she was done doing her homework for her parents to come home, but then something terrible happened right in front of her. A car was being chased by the police and the driver was trying to get away and drove right into the side of her parents' car. Her eyes widened and she began to tear up, she wiped the tears away and said,
N-No! Their not dead.... I shouldn't be crying. [/b] Morento ran out over to her parents and the car was really messed up, it was flipped over on the top and she gasped when she noticed that her parents were still alive. Mother! Father![/b] She ran over to the police and begged them to help her parents, she was bursting out in tears. One of the police officers called the hospital and the other one was trying to help out Morento's parents. She joined the officer and helped him get her parents out of the car, she heard the ambulance come quickly and a man and woman got out of the car. They walked over and lifted her father up onto the gurney and then another ambulance car showed up, putting her mother onto one of those things. The two were bleeding heavily and they had glass stuck in their arms and legs. Morento got in the ambulance car that her mother was in, she sat there and held her mother's hand. Once they got to the hospital, she waited in the patient room and she waited to hear the results of her parents. A doctor came out of a room and he walked over to Morento, telling her that her parents were going to die one way or another. They would either have to put both of them to sleep, or let them suffer the pain and die. Morento cried and she walked into the room her father was in. Father? Are you alright? The doctor told me what is going to happen.... Are you going to be okay with it?[/b] Morento asked and she pulled a chair over beside the bed and her father reached for her hand. He looked at her and smiled, telling her that everything was going to be fine through eye contact. Morento shook her head, saying that nothing was going to be fine and that he was just lying to make her feel better. The doctor came in and decided to put her father to sleep right after he was done putting her mother to sleep. Morento said her last goodbye to her father and she kissed him on the forehead, leaving the room with the doctor. The two walked into her mother's room and her mother knew at that minute that she was going to die. Morento walked over and she said goodbye and her mother was crying a little, but she told Morento that she would always be with her... Forever and ever. Morento decided to leave the hospital, she didn't want to see the doctor put her parents to sleep, it was too much for her to handle. Morento called her grandparents before she left the hospital, she waited in the rain. Water dripped from her hair and she shivered as it was cold outside. Her grandfather drove up beside Morento and her grandmother was crying, she got out of the car, walking over to Morento and hugging her. Oh, Morento... I am so sorry that this happened to your parents. You must come home and get dried off before you get a cold. What were you thinking of standing out in the rain? Come along, m'dear.The hug of her grandmother made her feel warm inside, she walked with her grandmother to the car and she got in the backseat. Her grandmother got in the front passenger's seat and they drove off to the house. Morento was still crying and she cried herself to sleep in the car. After that night, everything began to change. Morento's grades were dropping from A to F and she was also losing her focus on her music. She could barely play the piano, knowing that her father wasn't there to encourage her. Morento soon skipped a few weeks of school and she didn't bother to make up her homework. That's pretty much how she ended up repeating her second year of high school..... No one understood why she didn't pass, cause she passed all of her tests with flying colors. But, Kaede was the only one who knew what happened, because Morento trusted Kaede more than her other friends. It was tough on her grandmother, because Morento's mother was her grandmother's daughter. Her grandfather never cried in front of his wife and Morento, he ended up crying when he was outside alone. He just didn't want them to know that he was a crybaby at times like this. It was really hard on the Cross family, but they will manage to get through it together. Life has it's hardships, right? Well, it is definitely true....[/blockquote][/size] Controller's Information
Nickname xx Ash or Ashley. Age xx Seventeen. Gender xx Female. Seen the Anime/Played the Game? xx Seen the Anime. How Did You Find Us? xx I was looking for a Clannad site.
Sample RP xx[/size][/b][/size][/font] Morento was searching for the book she wanted to get the other day, but she couldn't find it. She looked from top to bottom on every bookshelf and someone accidentally bumped into her, making her bump into the bookshelf. Morento groaned and fell onto the floor, it looked like the bookshelf was going to fall over on her, but it managed to stay in it's place. But, some books fell out and hit Morento on the head and fell on the floor. Morento saw one tip over and fall down, she caught it and blinked curiously. The girl read the title and she didn't look so happy about it, even though this was the book she was looking for in the first place.
I went through all this trouble looking for you and you were hiding this whole time?
Yukine came back and checked up on Morento, she noticed her on the floor and mostly every single book fell out of the bookshelf. Morento looked up at Yukine and her cheeks turned red with embarrassment, she got up on and dusted her uniform. She felt kind of awful for making all of these books topple down to the floor and that Yukine would have to clean it up all by herself.
I'm sorry, Yukine. I'm very clumsy, please, let me put these books back where they were. [/color] Morento started to gather up all of the books that were on the floor, she stood up and put all the books back into place. She noticed Yukine bend down and pick up some of the other books and she smiled at Morento. It's okay. I would like to help you... I don't want you to do this all by yourself.[/color] Wow, Yukine felt the same. Morento didn't want Yukine to do it all by herself, and Yukine didn't want Morento to do it all by herself too. The blonde haired girl smiled and she took some of the books from Yukine carefully and she put them back. Yukine decided to go ahead and make tea for the both of them, but Morento didn't want to cause Yukine any trouble. But, Yukine turned to Morento and all she did was smile and say that it was no trouble at all. Yukine came back with a tray of her tea set and she set it down on a table. Morento walked over and she sat down in front of Yukine, she picked up one of the tea cups and took a sip out of the delicious tea that Yukine made. This is amazing, Yukine.Morento complemented the girl sitting across from her, she was warming up to Yukine already. It is no problem at all, Miss Cross. Cross? Why do you call me by my first name?She tilted her head, but she kept smiling. Yukine liked Morento too and she hoped that they could be friends. Morento put her tea cup down and she giggled a little, and Yukine was wondering why Morento was laughing. I don't know. I like calling people from their first names, even though I should call them by their last name. Please, call me Morento.[/color] Yukine blinked and she thought for a moment, it might be hard for her to get use to calling Cross by her first name. But, she promised she would try to call Cross by her first name from now on. Okay, Morento. Thank you.[/color] Morento smiled and she enjoyed staying in the library, look at what she just achieved. She might become Yukine's friend and just because she was being clumsy that they both bonded together and they were helping each other out. Let's have a toast to a new friendship.She said randomly and she tapped cups with Yukine, smiling sweetly. Yukine returned a smile and they both laughed about how this friendship began with Morento's clumsiness.[/blockquote][/size]
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Post by Kichiro Haru on Oct 6, 2011 20:00:07 GMT -6
Approval
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