Saika Hotta
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Post by Saika Hotta on Sept 19, 2015 17:43:33 GMT -6
||| SAIKA HOTTA ||| 雑賀堀田
#Name ; Saika Hotta #Age ; 15 #Gender ; Female #Sexuality ; Heterosexual #D.O.B. ; February 11th 1988 #Occupation ; Student #Year and class ; 1-A
#Height ; 4'6" (137 cm) #Weight ; 99 lbs (44.91 kg) #Physique ; Saika is a very small girl, and her petite frame doesn't help with people thinking of her as a small weak girl. She a bit skinny, and has a flat chest, though she has have noticeable curves. #Hair color and style ; She has short pink hair that has two bangs that go right past her cheeks, and her hair is frilled back in curls. She also keeps a space invader hair pin. #Eye color ; Her eyes are a pale brown, almost pink, color. #Other appearance details (optional) ; She is pale, and always has a blush on her cheeks. #Clothing styles ; She wears her school uniform neatly, on every school day. She also wears girly clothes like mini skirts and and dresses. She's mostly into Lolita type outfits, and light colors.
#Personality ; Saika is a cheerful, but shy young girl. She loves making friends, or at least trying to. She loves sweets, almost to a scary point. She'll never let up a time to eat sweets, she works it all off by taking everyday walks. She's is terrible at sports and often skips gym. She's often shy around people she's first met cause she hates people she doesn't know knowing about her. She often hates violence because her father abused her mother. Because of her troubled past she tried to put up a happy facade, often trying to hide the sadness inside of her.
She's got a small fear of dogs, her father used to fill her mind up with stories that dogs would kill her and it still has affected her psyche. She has a big love for bunnies because the only pet she ever had was a rabbit she named Lefty, because his left hind leg had been broken. She often loves going to school cause it keeps her as far away from her house as possible. She does have a tick though, when she is made fun of because of her chest size, then her indignation becomes uncontrollable.
#History ; Saika was born on February 11th, much to her father's dismay. Her father, Relius Shion, never wanted to have a child, or even a wife. He was forced to marry Saika's mother, Noel Hotta, but Noel never let him change her last name because of their hatred. As soon as Saika was born, Relius wanted nothing to do with her but Noel had to work all day so Relius had to take care of her. He often left her alone, letting her become independent.
When ever Noel got home she would hear screams coming from down stairs, she thought it was a movie most of the time but when Saika got worried and checked on them, she noticed her the shadow of her mother getting hit. After that she grew a hatred for her father, especially because he had started treating her terribly too. He often left her at school until late at night. Then her mother soon divorced her father, causing Saika to be stuck with her father that she so hated.
Soon her father's abuse almost got to her, so she ran away to her aunt's house where she actually had someone to love her. As she got to the age to start going to high school she decided to stop being a shy quiet girl, and make some friends. So she joined the choir club to make people notice her more.
The Roleplayer's Corner #Nickname ; Ari (And only that~ <3) #Age (optional) ; 13 (I hope you don't treat me like a kid though, or their may be...Blood...) #Gender (optional) ; Female #Ever roleplayed before? ; Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes... -Two hours later of saying yes- YES! #Other Characters (if any) ; Nope~ #Seen the anime/played the visual novel? ; I'm half way through the anime^^ (and I love it) #How did you find us? ; Dunno...Just kinda...Wanted to have anouther RP site I guess ^///^
#Sample Writing
As Saika walked down the street she noticed an odd looking cat, it's eye seemed to be clouded. Though she had seen cats around, she's never seen a cat like this. It seemed pretty normal, black silky fur with one big emerald eye. The other though seemed to be white and cloudy, almost like it was in another dimension. She almost felt sad just by looking at it, though she had time to spare until school started so she decided to go near it.
Aw hello little guy~
Saika hesitated, the cat didn't seem to notice her, maybe because she was kinda being a little quite, as she was about to say how cute it was when it turned and let out a quite meow. Saika didn't wanna scare the little thing so she just pet it quietly, just talking to it about her life. Soon, a while had passed and she had spent almost an hour with it.
Ack! I'm going to be late! Sorry Chiffon but I gotta go!
Saika ran off waving to the cat as it gave her a blank stare, then meowed, almost saying bye to her as well.
F.I.N.~
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Post by Inoue Kohaku on Sept 21, 2015 16:30:06 GMT -6
Hello, and welcome to Dango Daikazoku~ Thank you for applying. We will review your application soon, but in the meantime I'd like to point out a few quick things!
Face Claim
Allow me to give you a brief definition. "Face claims" are used to give us a rough idea of what your character looks like by "borrowing" the appearance of another character. We only use characters from anime, manga, or video games with animated styles as face claims on Dango Daikazoku. The most important rule regarding a face claim is that all content is properly sourced to the original creator.
You cite [http://kindacuteanime.com/] as your current face claim's source, but a short glance over the link shows that this is a website that reposts random anime-style images without crediting the original artist. I have attempted to search for the actual source of your face claim, but it's been reposted on the internet so many times that there is no way for me to find the original artist.
So, unfortunately, I have to ask you to use a different face claim for your character. My apologies for the extra chore... ^^; In the future, if you would like me to confirm a new face claim's source before publishing it in your application, feel free to PM me an image.
Here's my application, to show you an example. Note how I show the name, universe, and the source of the picture I used. In this case, the picture is official art made by the creators of my face claim, so there's no need to link to anything.
Avatar & Signature
The character in your avatar should be the same character as your face claim. They don't need to be the same image, though; two separate images is perfectly acceptable as long as they are of the same character. And, to comply with our rules, you must link to a source of your avatar art in your signature. As an example of this, see my own signature for the source of the art I use for my avatar. Again, if you need any help with this process, please let me know!
The last thing I'd like to point out is that your signature is a little long... Could you remove one of the two images you have in it? This will help keep our boards from getting too cluttered and be easier to browse.
Aaaand... that's it!
Thanks again for submitting an application! I'm excited for a chance to roleplay with you. We will review your character soon. In the meantime, feel free to PM me or add me on Skype (I am super_two) if you need any help with your application, or the things I mentioned above, or just the site in general. I'm glad to assist you in any way possible!
Take care~
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Post by Inoue Kohaku on Sept 21, 2015 18:43:48 GMT -6
Thank you for making those changes!
The new image you used [sofistyles271.deviantart.com/art/Nanami-Chiaki-Render-522285817], was actually another repost. However, I searched for a while and found the original source of your image! That would be [www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=40145390], which I've gone ahead and added to your application for you. We did it! c:
While I'm at it, let me go ahead and add that you don't need to source that avatar picture, because it's official art of Chiaki Nanami. Since your avatar is straight from Danganronpa 2, no source is required! Feel free to drop it out of your signature if you want to.
Thanks for complying, and great choice for a face claim~ Chiaki is precious. Now that this is sorted out, we will get to reviewing your application before the week ends.
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Post by Inoue Kohaku on Sept 24, 2015 23:48:34 GMT -6
Hi again! As I said before, thank you for applying at Dango Daikazoku!
First, let me compliment your sense of character growth. What do I mean? Well, a person's present is influenced by their past, and you take this concept well with your character. The little things like her dislike for violence reveal a little about the kind of life she has had up to this point. Good job showing that! You'd be surprised by how many people fall short in this area!
Regarding your character's appearance: You state that she is petite, and this is fine, but 69lb is extremely underweight for her height and age. Also, you state that she has some curves, but that requires at least some fat. I would add to the weight a bit so that she's between 85-100lb. The more "curvy" that you're imagining her, the higher in that range you'll want to be.
I'd like to clarify: is Saika her given name or family name? Here on Dango Daikazoku, we use family name first, given name second. I just wanted to make sure you had that down~!
Finally, nice sample! You use nice descriptions and don't artificially inflate your text, which is good. I can see your potential as an excellent roleplayer.
Now... everything else looks good! I'll approve you now, so just make that small change as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to roleplaying with you, Ari!
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